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Re: Re: Your poem shows you coming to terms despite getting drunk.

I am thinking of Sonnet No. 7, Imbibe. And thank you for ordering my second book. I hope you like it as well.

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on May 31, 2008 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

There's an old Latin saying "In vino veritas" (in wine, truth)

Years ago I lived the experience described in your poem -- and no, I did not go in to work the next morning. I remember feeling grateful for the physical pain in my head; it took my mind off the loss and betrayal. I hope you'll feel much better soon. :)

Keep writing!!!

posted by Pat_B on May 28, 2008 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

And, did you know it is reciprocal?

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 27, 2008 at 10:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Ah Bhaskar

... you are so sweet to be so kind...I am so glad to see your comment here... I really wait for it... thanks

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Great, Sinome!

Thanks Soul... I really appreciate your comment

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I love your ending!

Thanks Versatalia... It was a natural progression... can't take the credit of what I did udi but thanks

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 10:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: drunk though you might be ... your form is right

Hey Vickip, thanks... I was not so drunk... well.. actually I was quite wasted, but I am OK now... thanks sweetie.

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Despite the "volumes of sad unwritten verse" you make them come alive as only you can. I must commend you on your beautiful work of art. Know that I am a great fan of your's.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 27, 2008 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Elyse... but I am OK...just a moment of weakness. I am fine thanks

for your concern

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice Poem

Thank you so much Kolek..... I did not see joy the next morning though...just a big head ache and nothing different...but you are sweet and I thank you

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: What did you drink, milk, wateror honey?????

Yeah Sue... hmmmm... milk with a little water and honey... yeah...that is the ticket... Thanks sweetheart.. you are soooo cute!

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Marion... you are so right... <<<< as she presses the ice against her forehead>>> and by the way, that last post was fantastic. Thank you for that too.

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: It never does my friend it never does

Thank you Maria, God bless you too.

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Vogue, Sorry you are going through such a rough period. Being back home can not be easy...and you must miss your Mom something terrible. I lost mine 4 years ago and I still miss her every day. Take care of you and do not hesitate to let me know if I can help in any way. Take care of you and thank you for your comment.

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Moon, comming from you that is a great compliment

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Absolutely Brilliant Sinome! No-alcohol will not take away the pain for

Now you tell me :-) Thanks you so much Chris, you are as sweet as ever G-d bless you too.

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Beauty of love through a beautiful eye!!!

Thank you Geekunnel glad you liked it.

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Sam, you are a great Mom, I just felt bad ...there I was drinking myself to oblivion for such a trivial selfish thing and you so strong for your family. You are really an inspiration to me. I love you so much. Thanks for your nice comment :-)

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: U can't be serious..hope u snap out of it fast..u r too precious! - Ash

Sorry ash

I thought of taking it off this morning but hey, it is what it is and is not like I do it all the time... just a moment of self pity, You guys are friends and well... I feel it would be dishonest if I deleted it now that I am over it. :-) Thanks for your sweet concern

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Your poem shows you coming to terms despite getting drunk.

You are so sweet. Wow! you have published two books? I do not have that one but I will get it, which poem is it? Thank you for your nice comment.

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2008 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

Your poem shows you coming to terms despite getting drunk.

Not having gotten drunk myself, part of my general weirdness I suppose, it was never part of my coping. All the emotions are keenly felt when drink is either not used or ineffective.

Very affecting verse. It makes one want to dry your tears and comfort your brown eyes.

Love,
Carl Peter

PS: I have a poem in "Sonnets for the Spanish" you may like along this vein.

posted by cpklapper on May 27, 2008 at 11:44 AM | link to this | reply

U can't be serious..hope u snap out of it fast..u r too precious! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on May 27, 2008 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

What a great poem. I adore this so much. In the past I have been there myself. My dear Marta, I read your comment and I have never once thought you were a whiner over anything. We all have different avenues in life and our pain is always real. I encouraged my children to go and grab life by the horns and make it a worthy existence. They have done that. The choices worry me to no end but they are happy and it is rewarding for me. I would rather have them involved in something that makes a contribution as opposed to a self-centered life. sam

posted by sam444 on May 27, 2008 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

Beauty of love through a beautiful eye!!!

Enjoyed the way you narrated all these thfough lovely love filled words!!!

regards

geekunnel

posted by geekunnel on May 27, 2008 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

Absolutely Brilliant Sinome! No-alcohol will not take away the pain for

any length of time!Sadly-it has to be faced.God Bless.Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 27, 2008 at 4:30 AM | link to this | reply

This is truly excellent, Marta. Moon

posted by magic_moon on May 27, 2008 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

It never works, it only makes it worse. I love the form of your poems, great art. Thanks so much for your comment.

posted by vogue on May 27, 2008 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

It never does my friend it never does

a temporary release is all if that; but we all need even that temporary release to enable us to carry on; thanks for sharing this sad but lovely piece; God bless

posted by mariaki on May 27, 2008 at 12:49 AM | link to this | reply

The truth behind the pain..How downing your pain with a bottle..only leads to a headache and more pain..A great write!

posted by Wigopa_ on May 26, 2008 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply