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I can relate to this poem, nicely written!

Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 26, 2008 at 1:24 PM
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Nice ... very nice ... and I am going to keep hanging in here
with you until you write happier poetry of your new lease on life now that you no longer have the vortex human that sucked the joy, slowly, out of your life for so long. There is someone out there for you sweetie .,. and if not, you are there for you - hopefully the love you have for yourself will get you through. I just went through a similar situation, with a lot less time invested, so I know a little of what you are feeling ... email me if you want, if you need to talk. Meanwhile, huge hugs!
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 26, 2008 at 12:30 PM
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You are right to sing a new song, it is his loss. Keep looking up! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 26, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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Very nice, Rach
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 26, 2008 at 9:44 AM
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hi its ladydew
hi! this was good and sad... it happens sorry.... ladydew
posted by
ladydew
on May 26, 2008 at 8:58 AM
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Rach
posted by
Troosha
on May 26, 2008 at 8:12 AM
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