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        "it only rubs off the road of salvation

       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

posted by shamasehar on May 26, 2008 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

        "it only rubs off the road of salvation

       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

posted by shamasehar on May 26, 2008 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

        "it only rubs off the road of salvation

       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

posted by shamasehar on May 26, 2008 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

        "it only rubs off the road of salvation

       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

posted by shamasehar on May 26, 2008 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

        "it only rubs off the road of salvation

       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

posted by shamasehar on May 26, 2008 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzz
Giving someone the support or the love they need so that they may pursue their dreams and desires IS love.  This line was superb: When you come to me with steely pains

posted by Troosha on May 26, 2008 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

I got submerged in this very crooning poem filled with hopes for another. Thanks for sharing.

posted by aryaindia on May 26, 2008 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful
it sounds like my life

posted by Rach0602 on May 26, 2008 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

"It is a short journey from heaven
And it will touch me at my shore
If you walk along my love's very desire
And I will give you what I dream in my love"

Succinct!!! ~This poem moved my heart Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 26, 2008 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

This is a grand poem with so much meaning throughout! Well done. {Robert J. Martin is the brother of my former husband. We were very close and he was like a father to my children. My ex was an alcoholic. He passed away 10 years ago after getting an incurable cancer from agent orange while serving in Viet Nam.} Shelly

posted by sam444 on May 26, 2008 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply