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Suspenseful!
Kind of like your biography page!  Love it!   Talia

posted by versatalia on May 27, 2008 at 12:55 AM | link to this | reply

 Excellent writing ~  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 26, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

I love the concept. I was captured from the beginning. A fine job!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 26, 2008 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

aryaindia
"Go down my page".... I often think that if someone dear to me were to read my words they would learn so much about me.  I share them in here (Blogit) but often don't even share them with the people who mean so much to me.  Lovely poem! 

posted by Troosha on May 26, 2008 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

Good poem, well written

posted by Kayzzaman on May 26, 2008 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply