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Nicely done...a lot of effort, I'm sure. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on May 24, 2008 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

It is highly informative, thank you...

posted by Kayzzaman on May 24, 2008 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

I do not know about all that work you did trying to form Haikus or pseudo Haikus in your poem.  The poem itself its great!  never mind all the sweat and tears. I believe that poetry is what your poem is, thoughts pulled together that mean something to he or she who wrote them... feelings that are stringed on a thread of words to be displayed and shared with others. Do not poke fun at yourself my friend, whether you intended to write a beautiful poem or not, you did, and it is a very nice tribute to one of music's greats:Abelardo Huerta  was that really his name??? wow!:-)). Good job! 

posted by Sinome on May 24, 2008 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply