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You do not suck. This poem is good, heartfelt and packed with feeling. It is true everyone fucking dies, and it hurts yes, sometimes so much that one does not want to live anymore, but sooner or later we will also go, and meanwhile, this life is all we got, so we might as well make it count. Look around you, find the beauty on the things that are there, in the smells, in the colors. You have talent, and writing could be the help you seek. Write and write my friend, get it all out. Let the words be the fire that burns all that baggage that imprisons your heart, and don't forget to smile. G-d has not left you, he is there with you, you obviously believe in him because one can not be angry with something one does not think exists. Look for Him inside your heart and smile, even if it is in between your tears, smile... and little by little that smile will become real, and your heart will rest. Help is there, you could reach out if you can not do this on your own. That is the key though, reach out. Take care of you and I will be praying for you.
posted by
Sinome
on May 24, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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If it's any consolation ...
we all do, mate! But do your best, and channel your emotion into more lyrics man!
posted by
BC-A
on May 23, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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