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Kz, your poetry has a flavor of the great Indian writer / poet Tagore's...
well-done, keep it up! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 21, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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...you convey the angst very effectively....Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 21, 2008 at 7:00 PM
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"
Who is the man drowning himself in his own shadows" -nice line!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 21, 2008 at 6:08 PM
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Incredulous imagery. [I really don't know how many forms of poetry I know but my best guess is 50. Bhaskar liken one of my poems to Sufism; it kept hanging in the for front of my mind and I decided to look into it and discovered Ghazal. West poets have had success with this form and I am beginning to study it now with anticipation]. Shelly
posted by
sam444
on May 21, 2008 at 1:25 PM
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very sad but beautifully written.
posted by
Kabu
on May 21, 2008 at 11:47 AM
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Awesome imagery...Stunning write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 21, 2008 at 10:07 AM
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Great poem.
drowning himself in his own shadows. I love it, great poem!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 21, 2008 at 9:08 AM
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A Beautiful poem-echoing the sadness of the author! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 21, 2008 at 8:56 AM
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This poem has a great undercurrent of sorrow to it. I really loved the lines
No more sounds of existing conscience widening
Nor carrying the corpses of the man's dying soliloquy
As if the man twice dead among the burgeoning woods...
posted by
jmh256
on May 21, 2008 at 8:43 AM
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Deeply sad...emptiness is given voice in imagery! Well done
posted by
Ariala
on May 21, 2008 at 7:46 AM
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Great imagery Kazzyman~well done!
posted by
Lyrico
on May 21, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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