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thank you for sharing this most beautiful experience. i could see everything you described. great imagery! and yes, god must be an artiste!
posted by
bluebossa
on May 21, 2008 at 5:13 PM
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Marta & Marion...ahh yes, the Sierras, what lovely memories :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 21, 2008 at 10:30 AM
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My thoughts while reading this was of the Sierras..I love it up there..Great work..G-d as a woman what a great concept...
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 21, 2008 at 10:13 AM
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Sinome
That was beautiful, and the picture of the maline(sp) canyon in the rockies by Jasper AB was painted beautifully by you luv. Now you're the real poet my friend and I love your work.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 20, 2008 at 3:44 PM
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I thought of pictured rocks in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan. God is everywhere we look. A great poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 20, 2008 at 2:05 PM
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Reminded me of the many long drives thru the lovely state of California!Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 20, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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God is a SHE? That would upset many! Soul is sexless, so I'm not hurt! lol
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 20, 2008 at 10:03 AM
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I was taken back to the Australian outback at dawn. All it needs is a
Kangaroo and a cockatoo and a dusty dirty packed floor.
posted by
Kabu
on May 20, 2008 at 6:15 AM
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I am there with you, such a sweet one.
posted by
Star5_
on May 20, 2008 at 6:12 AM
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I like it.
Perhaps, God is a female. I believe God does have a feminine side. Thanks for
sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 20, 2008 at 3:51 AM
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Beautiful dear Sinome
inducing such imagery and a feeling of unbounded peace...... thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 20, 2008 at 2:48 AM
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I agree, Sinome...
...God doesn't have to be a
male deity. In fact, God doesn't have to be, nor is, I think, a specific gender at all. If God were a specific gender, who is he/she mating with in order to create? Not that this has anything to do with the thrust of your poem....which was lovely, by the way. But, I digress. Okay, I'm shutting up now.
posted by
metalrat
on May 19, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Ok, so I'm not done yet. Yes, I was surprised with G-D which awakened me to the foregoing of the piece, which kind of changed the meaning around without changing its properties. Opened me to something, but it wasn't a flood of images. That simple change was, for me, both startling and subtle which started to inform me about the rhythm and intention of the piece and how delicately it was woven. (That little turn was such a great surprise for me),
John
posted by
jfm32
on May 19, 2008 at 8:17 PM
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I sense it.
Beautiful imagery that uses color and senses through the eyes of a modern woman, love.
posted by
BC-A
on May 19, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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Wonderful cast into archetypal identity..G-D, and artist as dreamer. Loved the touch, and almost felt a finger pointing inside me, ever so gently.
John
posted by
jfm32
on May 19, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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