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                KaBooM, I've never read your story before.  You write very well.  Now that I've read a post, I'll probably have to start keeping up with it.  
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    TAPS.
                     on May 19, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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                Great set up to seek adventure in unfamiliar territory with anticipation. I saw where you like Toni Morrison. I think she is an excellent role model for dialogue and set up. sam  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on May 18, 2008 at 3:46 PM
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