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Wow! Looking in on the family ties..this can be a hard thing..I can't wait to read more..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 18, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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Intriguing poem. I just love your writing style too.! I always feel as if I'm their.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 18, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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Wow, I just love your style...you are a great poet, but at heart you are a story teller. This poem is laden with the questions on your mind. I love the concept of it and the image of the " ...
old brown envelope, worn thin with tears..." touched me deep inside. Just great poem!
posted by
Sinome
on May 17, 2008 at 10:15 PM
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Enthralling write! Well related!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 17, 2008 at 8:32 PM
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Very interesting...love it though.
posted by
dpaulinomorris24
on May 17, 2008 at 8:32 PM
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Iteresting subject, and was captured by the internal rhythmn--just enough--the jounalistic instinct to report a story and bring someone into it. Really liked the idea of letting me look at the story for myself, and your genlte hand at revealing it.
John
posted by
jfm32
on May 17, 2008 at 1:17 PM
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