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Kayzzaman
I just started reading down through all of your poems from the most recent posting until this one....I'm finally off for a few days and can catch up a little. What a powerful piece. I'm new to trying my hand at poetry and this so humbles me....I don't know if I will do anymore! I can't say that I have that passion for the form, that it ever comes out of me like that.....for me, I more often have something to say and decide to try it in poetic form....more for a change in writing style. I know that shows and so that's why I usually word it as practicing, and never call myself a poet by any means. Anyway, this was beautiful, as were al the ones before this one. Thank you for sharing your emotions and your heart
posted by
Krisles
on May 20, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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Have you been in deep contemplation lately? This is just grand. I sent an email to you! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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Very very expressive piece!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 17, 2008 at 8:12 PM
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the joy and the pain of creating something from nothing unique for this is the first time this has ever been A really lovely wrk that I so enjoyed reading.
posted by
Kabu
on May 17, 2008 at 7:21 PM
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Kayzzaman, In the reading of this poem, one feels almost like they were at the birthing of your poem, partaking of the whole process.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 17, 2008 at 10:16 AM
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A poem was born
This gave birth, I love the inspiration
This came indepth, what a joy to dig into the perception
This was precise, I say, keep writing, for in me, Poetry came.
posted by
Rexx_D_Artist
on May 17, 2008 at 9:52 AM
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Incredible! A lovely tribute to the
.. or your ... creative process. I also thought how the lives of some very talented and deeply feeling people see life in poetry not yet written. I thoroughly enjoyed this.
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 17, 2008 at 9:32 AM
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I really enjoyed reading this, very well articulated and the word choice is great!
posted by
Evastars
on May 17, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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What can i say? This poem expresses in the most lyrical and descriptive way the joy and pain of creativity. The gift to see things in a different way and make it like a symphony of images and sounds. You have the third eye of a poet. Bravo!
posted by
chiq
on May 17, 2008 at 8:03 AM
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blooming and blushing, fears and cheers
this being the first poem of the day for me to read... what a treasure trove here, truly only a true poet could dive to such depths! absolutely beautiful and captures the joy and turmoil of the gift. bravo!
posted by
bluebossa
on May 17, 2008 at 7:04 AM
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wow, such imagery and passion...good work!
posted by
Ariala
on May 17, 2008 at 6:07 AM
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This is a beautiful, most astounding poem ~ Oh this touched my soul...and if it could not get any better, I read this final line: "A poem will be born out of all the bones and skins of me
And I will write a symphony of love, O My Beloved." I am just sighing with such emotion --- I say 'write on!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 17, 2008 at 5:37 AM
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