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Re: Thank you for the comment, Soul Builder.
I especially like the "well dramatized" (Once a playwright, always a playwright...)
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 18, 2008 at 1:34 AM
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Re: Thank you, Sam!
I appreciate your comments very much!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 18, 2008 at 1:33 AM
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Re: Thank you for your lovely comment!...
How did I do that with the soundscape? Well, first you need a brother who is a composer, I guess, and who loves to make creepy musical soundscapes.
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 18, 2008 at 1:32 AM
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A sense of the macabre, well dramatized!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 17, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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I was rapt. The dimensions were incredulous. It was sweeping emotion from top to bottom. Congratulations. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2008 at 8:11 PM
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Beautifully written, I found it very romantic and sensual. I just loved the poem. The sound scared the life out of me when it began but after I had realized it was comming from your page and my palpitations settled down, I really found it very cool! how did you do that? The whole experience was great! Thanks :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 17, 2008 at 5:57 PM
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Re: Ah, that's great!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 17, 2008 at 10:25 AM
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A familiar separation of mind and body ... conflicting thoughts on a difficult choice. I love this ... I can't imagine why I have not read your work before. This oversight will be rectified!
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 17, 2008 at 10:20 AM
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A very beautiful write, I can relate to this feeling. From my
to your
.
posted by
cmhnord
on May 17, 2008 at 9:31 AM
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Sounds like how it feels...
...to be in love....for me at least. Love isn't always cozy, is it?
Excellent poem and thank you for visiting my blog yesterday.
posted by
metalrat
on May 17, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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Stunning poetry ~ powerful imagery and line up line ~ Poetry~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 17, 2008 at 5:49 AM
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