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It is what is it.

"Oh let me be confused no more
Let right be right and wrong be wrong
Let my feet walk a straight path
Carry me when my weakness sets in"

It gets to a time when one gets weary, when you feel like you are just going about in circles.  I like these lines.  "Let right be right and wrong be wrong"

 

posted by safriyie on May 28, 2008 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Nicely composed.

posted by vogue on May 16, 2008 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Very well crafted, nicely thought. Well done!

posted by Kayzzaman on May 16, 2008 at 5:02 AM | link to this | reply

Bravo! cleverly thought out and consistent flow!StarThumbs Up

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 16, 2008 at 1:36 AM | link to this | reply