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 Damn! good, work! I really like this one!

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posted by lestate7 on May 15, 2008 at 3:11 PM | link to this | reply

A very beautiful, powerful, and great imagery in this write. I love this. From my  to your .

posted by cmhnord on May 15, 2008 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

WOW-what a "words"full of pictures in my mind very rich this is-and many directions it flows-gliding to one-

posted by bumpsinaroad on May 15, 2008 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzz
Wow - your sure can weave and shape your thoughts into a powerful read.  And you and I got closer and closer together all alone in frigid silence  - this line leaped out at me! 

posted by Troosha on May 15, 2008 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

What really takes the breath away is your power of painting with words. Thanks for liking my humble poem.

posted by vogue on May 15, 2008 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

Great post my friend
very well done; thank you

posted by mariaki on May 15, 2008 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply

I experienced this as profoundly visually imaginative and thought provoking.

posted by AardigeAfrikaner on May 15, 2008 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply