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You are speaking for many people here CR ~ sad state we're in --- struggling and hoping (me)  - roof over the head, food (staples) and well, so far treads on my shoes...will get me anywhere.   (cause when I went and got gas today WOW ~ whats up with that? more increase???) Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 19, 2008 at 4:33 PM | link to this | reply

Oh how I know what this is like...I like the humour though.  You kept it light hearted.

posted by TerAmerica on May 16, 2008 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

I tell you, this is me, this month. I am getting things paid but it is excruciatingly slow. I adore this poem, it speaks to many people.  sam

posted by sam444 on May 16, 2008 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

I liked it...
It sounds like it could be a song or something.

posted by The_Common_Senseless on May 16, 2008 at 12:37 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice write and so relatable. From my  to your .

posted by cmhnord on May 15, 2008 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

CR
You're pretty darn creative!

posted by Troosha on May 15, 2008 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed this and I relate to it.
I enjoyed the part about moving to China, and gettting a job there and free food. It is difficult to see the economy here in the states at times fail the workers and employed. A good job is hard to find.

posted by Kobriel on May 15, 2008 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Very interesting. Well written, Shelley.

posted by Kayzzaman on May 15, 2008 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply