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Wow! thanks Sam... nice to know something good came out of a very sour mood
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lionreign
on May 16, 2008 at 4:19 PM
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thank you Elyse
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lionreign
on May 16, 2008 at 4:18 PM
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Thanks Troosha - hope it didn't depress you...
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lionreign
on May 16, 2008 at 4:17 PM
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Re: Very well written my dear.....
Thanks Mariaki... funny how this one really leapt into verse
posted by
lionreign
on May 16, 2008 at 4:17 PM
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This is creative imagery in poetry. I felt the same as Elyse. It grabs and holds the reader! Well done indeed! sam
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sam444
on May 16, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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I was synched into the whole meter of this from the
grey felt to the very last line...succinct! ~ well written, my Poet ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 15, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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Lion
Your words certainly drove home the sentiment of lost hope...
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Troosha
on May 15, 2008 at 11:17 AM
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Very well written my dear.....
dreams are sometimes not as disjointed as they seem! Thank you and take care
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mariaki
on May 15, 2008 at 6:26 AM
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Re: I love your use of the word "apathetic" twice...it really brings this w
Thanks for your comments FYS
posted by
lionreign
on May 15, 2008 at 5:55 AM
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And there is always the hope of wakefulness
Thanks
posted by
lionreign
on May 15, 2008 at 5:54 AM
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I love your use of the word "apathetic" twice...it really brings this work
home. A sad commentary on despair. Thanks for postingn this.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on May 15, 2008 at 5:47 AM
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Some dreams are like that, well done.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 15, 2008 at 5:27 AM
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