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Absolutely beautiful Maria, touching in its sincerity. Great poem!
posted by
Sinome
on May 14, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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Wow!
You can't ask for more than that! Great write!
posted by
CRShelley
on May 14, 2008 at 10:31 AM
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correction -
Mariaki (Don't know how "Ma" got in there)
posted by
Troosha
on May 14, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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Ma
We don't ask for much, do we? Yet some people can "deliver", while others can't....
posted by
Troosha
on May 14, 2008 at 8:24 AM
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mariaki, sometimes you use imagery in your poems. Most of the time your lines fall within the realm of what I term modern woman poems. I find you in the company of modern music by females. From Great Britain love comes the beautiful blonde Natasha Bedingfield. Although I relate to her current piece
Pocketful of Sunshine, her first
really big hit from the film that stars Diane Keaton
Because "Unwritten" strikes the mood of the strong-willed woman. In other words, the lines evoke a tough feeling. All in all you write well to this man, love. Granted, your poems aim at women. In this way I wish you luck in your relationships. A smart woman like you deserves someone nice. Take care
posted by
BC-A
on May 14, 2008 at 7:57 AM
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