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Great story and thanks for your comment.
posted by
vogue
on May 14, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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Thanks you so much for your comment and your praise.
posted by
vogue
on May 13, 2008 at 8:07 AM
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This is lovely - ever thought of writing children's books?
Seriously your imagination really lends itself to this format. Plus there's some great messaging in this that kids would appreciate! More please :o)
posted by
helenography
on May 13, 2008 at 5:48 AM
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How cute! You are such a good writer. I imagine this story
could be related to by inmates who have grown accustomed to their society there. Never tasting the good side of freedom, only seeing it as a bad thing, always sends them screaming back to their three meals and a cot. Your characters are way cuter than any inmate though ... love Dodger, lol! Fun read.
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 12, 2008 at 5:40 PM
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