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A Fantastic piece Kayzzaman! "The Beginning"--Have I got that right?Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 13, 2008 at 6:20 AM | link to this | reply

Such Great imagination, and colorful descriptions, I love it!

posted by yellowrose55 on May 12, 2008 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Eternal and charming error indeed ......

posted by afzal50 on May 12, 2008 at 5:35 PM | link to this | reply

This is crazy good ... I had to read it twice to be sure ... this is birth?
Reading it from that avenue of understanding I was blown away.  Simply amazing write.

posted by VictoriaP on May 12, 2008 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

wow, did you see this inside the womb?  This is a powerful write ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 12, 2008 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Vivid & intriguing! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on May 12, 2008 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful imagery...
a very vivid piece.

posted by helenography on May 12, 2008 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

absolutely gorgeous!

posted by pelagus on May 12, 2008 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply