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When a haiku moves you.. you know it is good.. really good.
~Peace,, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on May 12, 2008 at 6:21 PM
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How nostalgic. Beautiful, Nautikos.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 12, 2008 at 3:45 PM
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Very beautiful ... I love the sense of peace
this made me feel.
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 12, 2008 at 8:28 AM
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Particularly
beautiful this one haiku--
droplets trail down glass.
posted by
Ciel
on May 11, 2008 at 9:10 AM
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Truly an inspirational moment ~ Haiku ---- maximus ~ This moves me...so poignant! ~ and an interpretation could be dual meaningful
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 10, 2008 at 10:44 PM
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I like the imagery here.
Excellent and poignant Haiku, Jack.
posted by
metalrat
on May 10, 2008 at 9:47 AM
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How DO you do it? I'll never master that art, so I humbly admire your haikus.
posted by
vogue
on May 10, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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This is a pure haiku, unlike mine that follow line scheme! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 10, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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