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i felt the rain
I felt the rain
dropping down my face
I felt the pain
reading down as I trace.
This was nicely written
Keep up the good pace.
posted by
Rexx_D_Artist
on May 12, 2008 at 3:49 AM
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Very powerful ... what a picture you have painted here ...
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 11, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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Awesome work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 11, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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hi! its ladydew
hi! great writing... powerful! ladydew
posted by
ladydew
on May 11, 2008 at 6:29 AM
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"Like a Wallflower blushing in jingles of rain"--that's so beautifull!
All of it but especially that line.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 11, 2008 at 3:06 AM
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someday, something will the pain and sorrow my dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 10, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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sorrow
you delve deep in the land of sorrow... you bare your soul for us.
posted by
bluebossa
on May 10, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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I deal with chronic and some days there isn't any relief to be found. I like this very much. A grand depiction! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 10, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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