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Good poem ! WEll written !

posted by afzal50 on May 9, 2008 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman-this is very deep and a Beautifull piece of work! Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 9, 2008 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply

yes, let's meet on thisisbyus. I just posted another little tidbit. I haven't done a profile because I do not want to make my email address public and they have just put the photo of an old man on my entries. I don't know how to get rid of that ugly portrait, I'm neither a man nor THAT old and I flatter myself not to be ugly either. Any idea what I could do? At least they could leave it blank.

posted by vogue on May 9, 2008 at 1:08 PM | link to this | reply

I felt the cleansing of the soul in preparation for an enlightened eternal existence!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 9, 2008 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman
you bind words together in a way i had never seen, so intense it is almost overpowering

posted by lindo on May 9, 2008 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

What a keen write ~ full of inspiration and introspective value ~ This is awesome!!! ~~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 9, 2008 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome!!
Wish I could comment on all. You are so talented. I enjoy your work. Solita

posted by ace2inspire on May 9, 2008 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting perspective and well developed into poetry!

posted by Ariala on May 9, 2008 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply