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Good poem ! WEll written !
posted by
afzal50
on May 9, 2008 at 4:58 PM
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Kayzzaman-this is very deep and a Beautifull piece of work! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 9, 2008 at 1:42 PM
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yes, let's meet on thisisbyus. I just posted another little tidbit. I haven't done a profile because I do not want to make my email address public and they have just put the photo of an old man on my entries. I don't know how to get rid of that ugly portrait, I'm neither a man nor THAT old and I flatter myself not to be ugly either. Any idea what I could do? At least they could leave it blank.
posted by
vogue
on May 9, 2008 at 1:08 PM
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I felt the cleansing of the soul in preparation for an enlightened eternal existence! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 9, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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Kayzzaman
you bind words together in a way i had never seen, so intense it is almost overpowering
posted by
lindo
on May 9, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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What a keen write ~ full of inspiration and introspective value ~ This is awesome!!! ~

~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 9, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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Awesome!!

Wish I could comment on all. You are so talented. I enjoy your work.


Solita
posted by
ace2inspire
on May 9, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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Interesting perspective and well developed into poetry!
posted by
Ariala
on May 9, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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