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posted by
TerAmerica
on May 9, 2008 at 1:49 PM
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Universal Love
The sweet torment of being in love is tremendously difficult to articulate, and with every reader their own unique experiences do not always match those described by a poet. But I think you have managed to touch the essence of love; and so succeeded in phrasing it in such a way that is instantly recognised by one and all. Well done.
Poteen (UK)
posted by
poteen
on May 8, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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Kayzz
That's love, alright...
posted by
Troosha
on May 8, 2008 at 9:57 AM
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WEll Expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on May 8, 2008 at 5:43 AM
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Hopefully you will find YOURSELF someday, too.
posted by
WindTapper
on May 8, 2008 at 4:37 AM
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Just lovely Kayzz.........
perfect imagery; I am fortunate enought to know this feeling very well; thank you and take care
posted by
mariaki
on May 8, 2008 at 3:44 AM
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This is of "LOVE" ~ of sacrifice ~ of truth ~ of much depth!!~
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 7, 2008 at 11:09 PM
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good one...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 7, 2008 at 10:55 PM
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KZ, you are in love!!!!
Beautiful dedication to someone special. Have read your latest few poems. Ok you are not born poet but you are sure an artiste. Interesting arts!!
posted by
nuzila
on May 7, 2008 at 10:50 PM
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This is an awesome work! Great post!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 7, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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"
The moment blows me out of existence" -nice line!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 7, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on May 7, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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