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I like the transition from comfort, to security, to realization! Excellent!! sam
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sam444
on May 8, 2008 at 1:44 PM
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Beautiful poem, such a strong statement of faith and need. Loved it!
posted by
Sinome
on May 7, 2008 at 8:44 PM
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Powerful love! I loved the twist at the end! Very well done. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 7, 2008 at 7:31 PM
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Your trust is amazing
posted by
Straightforward
on May 7, 2008 at 7:07 PM
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