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PS--sp: boundaries, And also if you find my socks,which kind of blew off in the middle of the read, could you send them back to me. They were the only ones without holes for the big toe.
Me again
posted by
jfm32
on May 10, 2008 at 1:38 PM
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You just touched some of my boudaries (ok,most). Not often I arrive at the speechless, so I hope you can hear me.
John
posted by
jfm32
on May 10, 2008 at 1:29 PM
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wow-i could say alo t-but i think it is better just to say--it is really just crafted beautifully
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 10, 2008 at 10:24 AM
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I identify wiith your poem, but ...
get well, love. Last night I took a nap at 7:00. I slept for nine hours as my numbers dropped a bit. I dreamed a nightmare. Thus, I died and relived too.
posted by
BC-A
on May 8, 2008 at 1:38 PM
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Purple
I enjoyed the journey you took us on... This one stands out for me - my favourite, perhaps.
posted by
Troosha
on May 8, 2008 at 7:44 AM
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Very true ! Every story begins with a promise !
posted by
afzal50
on May 8, 2008 at 5:35 AM
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Beautifully captured dear Jen............
excellent work as always; trust you are well, take care and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 8, 2008 at 3:40 AM
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Outstanding work, as usual!!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 7, 2008 at 11:02 PM
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" I harbored mistakes and folded history/On the lap of my story" -great line! (the rest is really good also)
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 7, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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love it
posted by
Star5_
on May 7, 2008 at 10:07 PM
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The many "channels of life captured here..Great Job Jen!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 7, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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We are all on a "journey" of one sort or another. Prayers, poems and promises are good company along the way.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 7, 2008 at 8:40 PM
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purple
I love the rain and the picture is really neat
posted by
Lanetay
on May 7, 2008 at 6:47 PM
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I normally do not like long poems but this one would not let me go. great job my friend
posted by
spinner
on May 7, 2008 at 6:36 PM
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We may not know it now and we may push from consciousness the memory of the promises that we made but, when that day comes, we will all have the same hope, the same wish. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 7, 2008 at 6:35 PM
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Passionate and speaks to my heart of redemption and rebirth --- of maturing and growing and all from being nurtured --- awww this is touching and I so love your sensitivity and dear passion, so palpable. Love you much Jen ~
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 7, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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