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i find it really amusing that you criticize my writing but back it up with this crap...
obviously you're entitled to your opinion, but damn..."The Water of Love"? are you serious? unless you're joking, in which case i didn't get it...sorry...
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 7, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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Nice poem... but if you want everyone to love each other, why not love the "elite" ones as well, after all, are they to blame for having been born to their world? We must start by loving those we do not like, because loving those we do like is just too easy :-) don't you agree? In any case great poem, you are very talented
posted by
Sinome
on May 7, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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Interesting post.
posted by
jmh256
on May 7, 2008 at 6:43 PM
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