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amazing first stanza!! a very weighty poem indeed

posted by NighthawkNY on May 7, 2008 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

Wow great write. From my  to your .

posted by cmhnord on May 7, 2008 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

Dutchman
You sure can deliver a punch!

posted by Troosha on May 7, 2008 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

This is lovely, Dutchman

posted by Kayzzaman on May 7, 2008 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply