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Kayzz
As Scramble said, your writing is very deep but it's riveting and you always captivate me.
posted by
Troosha
on May 7, 2008 at 12:26 PM
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Genuine Poerty
You have a wonderfully classical, rich, poetic style; the rhythm flows so naturally and yet is kept in excellent control. You also have a gift for detecting the natural weight of words, which is essential for a genuine poet.
posted by
poteen
on May 7, 2008 at 12:17 PM
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posted by
jmh256
on May 7, 2008 at 11:50 AM
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Hi kayzzaman. Just discovered you on thisisbyus. I joined two days ago. I'm lilypond there. Happy to find another blogit friend on that site.
posted by
vogue
on May 7, 2008 at 11:48 AM
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This is deep and excellent Kayzzaman! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 7, 2008 at 8:20 AM
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Very poignant, such depth and truth! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 7, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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Wonderful read
U R
Artistically written!
Solita
posted by
ace2inspire
on May 7, 2008 at 6:18 AM
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"Sacred psalms would sing a lullaby in remains of ruins
Awakening the souls of the motherless child"
I loved these lines, but great write all around.
posted by
jmh256
on May 7, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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Great my friend! Harpo47
posted by
Harpo47
on May 7, 2008 at 6:05 AM
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Well put indeed
If only's and had's are hard to ignore. You have created a very insightful (and for me personally) a very moving poem. *Clap clap* Wonderful!
posted by
Kobriel
on May 7, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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Ah, yes, had it been...well put!
posted by
Ariala
on May 7, 2008 at 6:00 AM
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