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Yes there are many different types of people that are out there..It takes all kinds to make the world soo cool to live in..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 7, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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So true Mermaid dear and its all the all the colors that make it beautiful. Great work!
posted by
Sinome
on May 7, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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this is truely great work!
posted by
lestate7
on May 7, 2008 at 1:50 PM
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Very nice indeed and very true.
The more I travel the more the world un-ravel and is shown to be a Kaleidoscope! Tschüs!
posted by
auslander
on May 7, 2008 at 12:05 PM
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The world is a stage and we whirl around until we are dizzy. Who gives us orientation? Wonderful post.
posted by
vogue
on May 7, 2008 at 10:14 AM
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Oh, the kaleidoscope lets you see the different hues!
posted by
Straightforward
on May 7, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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What can I say, tremendous work!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 7, 2008 at 7:42 AM
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Nice!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 7, 2008 at 6:31 AM
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posted by
jmh256
on May 7, 2008 at 6:13 AM
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Nothing is gained by looking away.........
God gave us eyes to see not to keep closed; very well done my friend; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 7, 2008 at 3:20 AM
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Well Crafted
As always I expected something profound, unique, genuine, and pure...Thank you for your honesty.
As many have commented, I am but many i'm afraid..."Look At All The Colors"...I guess you can say
posted by
jpart122500
on May 6, 2008 at 10:51 PM
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i love it
posted by
Star5_
on May 6, 2008 at 10:27 PM
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Perfect descriptions ~ again Dear Jen you touch my heart...with your sensitivity and Passion you have ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 6, 2008 at 9:36 PM
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I agree don't look away. lovely darling
posted by
Kabu
on May 6, 2008 at 9:15 PM
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Hi Mermaid
as always, you give from the top of your game! Thanks for another good poem.
posted by
Loribeth215
on May 6, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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Lovely as always sweet Jen ... my favorite line ... and, as always ...
there is that one that stands out for me .... "
What is the beauty of laughter…if no one knows of tears?"
posted by
VictoriaP
on May 6, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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Those anchored in the spirit never get confused by the material transmutations. No relativism can distort their perceptions. Numeric superiority is immaterial, quality counts!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 6, 2008 at 8:29 PM
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" There is ‘us’ in between…" -my favorite line! really great, evocative writing!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 6, 2008 at 7:52 PM
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You Are My Favorite!!
posted by
CRShelley
on May 6, 2008 at 7:10 PM
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Just grand my dear. Did you get my email. Love to you my dears: Shae and Stef! Grandma
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2008 at 7:07 PM
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purple
very pretty
posted by
Lanetay
on May 6, 2008 at 6:20 PM
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I wish people understood your message !
posted by
afzal50
on May 6, 2008 at 5:27 PM
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