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I was touched by this because I read if from the perspective of my daughter who is deaf. Although the absence of hearing in this piece might be metaphorical, it moved me.
posted by
Troosha
on May 7, 2008 at 11:53 AM
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wonderful read
thank you so much for sharing it
posted by
lionreign
on May 7, 2008 at 8:01 AM
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A beautiful piece sweetie
both words and imagery perfectly blend; excellent; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on May 7, 2008 at 3:22 AM
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i agree with everyone, superlative!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 6, 2008 at 8:48 PM
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See, you are in your own element! Excellent!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 6, 2008 at 8:47 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on May 6, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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I adored the theme and the imagery is outstanding! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2008 at 6:56 PM
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beautiful
i really felt who you are in this poem thank you. mike
posted by
meeks2
on May 6, 2008 at 4:45 PM
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wonderful point of view to exp from.
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on May 6, 2008 at 4:44 PM
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I like this one too. tho I had a little problem with line 13--"I read your masculine lips" which threw me off a bit both rhythmically and started wondering it I were reading a novel, and it is here that the poem became gender-griven--which you might have wanted to convey. But men thave these same feelings too.
Just a thought. But if you deleted "masculine" you might be writing for both of us.
John
posted by
jfm32
on May 6, 2008 at 3:57 PM
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