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This is beautiful
posted by
callista22001
on May 8, 2008 at 5:27 AM
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I like this one--the voice and how it rolls out into its structural simplicity: the announcement of the thought (the begining), its description of why you are thinking this thought (succinctly in 3 lines/the middle), and the finale as reaffirmation of original thought, again in 3 lines (or was it 4?). Maybe it's just me, or the beer ive been drinking--but almost thought I was hearing an opera.
Succinct, clear, and direct--and perhaps an experience ive been missing of late.
posted by
jfm32
on May 6, 2008 at 3:08 PM
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hi its ladydew
hi! I really liked this piece! good write! ladydew
posted by
ladydew
on May 6, 2008 at 3:08 PM
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