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Excellent..great...no words to describe!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on May 6, 2008 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

Perfect!

posted by Kolekshuns on May 6, 2008 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

posted by bumpsinaroad on May 6, 2008 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

thanks a lot for reading...you're my inspiration...such a  great writer...with marvelous imaginations...

posted by _mai_ on May 6, 2008 at 6:29 PM | link to this | reply

Splendid

posted by afzal50 on May 6, 2008 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

if you feel ambitious you could expand this out into a small story!

posted by thecryptkeeper on May 6, 2008 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

All of creation is contained in the outstanding poem. Well done indeed! sam

posted by sam444 on May 6, 2008 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

Simply Lovely Kayzzaman! Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 6, 2008 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman ~.~
Very nice interpretation of creation. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on May 6, 2008 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

Flight of imagination!

posted by Straightforward on May 6, 2008 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

Bitter-sweet ~ this is so touching ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 6, 2008 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

hmmmmm
interesting twist...... very this day and age....... very nice.... have a good day....

posted by whiteknight3128 on May 6, 2008 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful work!

posted by Ariala on May 6, 2008 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply