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Excellent..great...no words to describe!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 6, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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Perfect!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 6, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 6, 2008 at 6:32 PM
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thanks a lot for reading...you're my inspiration...such a great writer...with marvelous imaginations...
posted by
_mai_
on May 6, 2008 at 6:29 PM
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Splendid
posted by
afzal50
on May 6, 2008 at 4:53 PM
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if you feel ambitious you could expand this out into a small story!
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on May 6, 2008 at 4:45 PM
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All of creation is contained in the outstanding poem. Well done indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2008 at 1:57 PM
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Simply Lovely Kayzzaman! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 6, 2008 at 12:22 PM
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Kayzzaman ~.~
Very nice interpretation of creation. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 6, 2008 at 10:26 AM
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Flight of imagination!
posted by
Straightforward
on May 6, 2008 at 8:52 AM
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Bitter-sweet ~ this is so touching ~

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 6, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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hmmmmm
interesting twist...... very this day and age....... very nice.... have a good day....
posted by
whiteknight3128
on May 6, 2008 at 6:56 AM
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beautiful work!
posted by
Ariala
on May 6, 2008 at 5:53 AM
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