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posted by
TerAmerica
on May 9, 2008 at 1:56 PM
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It took a bit to get the flow, but it is a great style! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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Excellent work!
posted by
Katray2
on May 6, 2008 at 8:31 AM
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wow, this one is so emotive ~ moves through the creativity of the whole piece ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 6, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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An awesome Style..
Loved this one..
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 5, 2008 at 10:59 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on May 5, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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...so, then, your poetry speaks of love and hints at woundedness...and you're very talented...and if touching those places in another and evoking those memories is the sign of a gifted writer...well, then, you have a bright future....very well done.... Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on May 5, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Extremely creative.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 5, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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Creative indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on May 5, 2008 at 6:08 PM
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NighthawkNY, finally unrequited feelings with love curiously done, love. 
posted by
BC-A
on May 5, 2008 at 5:46 PM
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Alright, I'm listening, my mind is still catching up, I'll have to read this one a few times.
Thanks, you've got me thinking.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 5, 2008 at 5:07 PM
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Very interesting form. It reminds me of the Sunday New York Times Acrostic puzzle.
posted by
jmh256
on May 5, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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outstanding plot my dear...i love how it glides...well done dear..
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 5, 2008 at 4:30 PM
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Never seen this before. Very interesting. Thanks for your comment on my poem.
posted by
vogue
on May 5, 2008 at 4:02 PM
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Interesting technique! A 2 for 1!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 5, 2008 at 3:59 PM
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Interesting
posted by
dpaulinomorris24
on May 5, 2008 at 3:56 PM
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