Comments on haiku no. 13

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Feral was a nice touch.
Good job.

posted by metalrat on May 10, 2008 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos, Now, I'm going to need built-in rendering, lots of settings and some context help to untangle my quanta.   In my case the feral eyes have saber teeth too.

 

posted by TAPS. on May 7, 2008 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

Sinister my friend so well written I had to shiver.

posted by Kabu on May 6, 2008 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

awesome

posted by BC-A on May 6, 2008 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

lilac feral eyes ~ this is stunning imagery ~ Love your Haiku ~  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 5, 2008 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply

Now this one for me was cool because I could do what I wanted with feral. Well done indeed!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 5, 2008 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply