Go to Martas poems
- Add a comment
- Go to It rains
WoW!! What read this was greatly written really enjoyed this read.
posted by
Mystereo
on October 5, 2010 at 8:11 PM
| link to this | reply
this painted a beautiful canvas to me
almost like an experience u need/like to have
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 6, 2008 at 7:15 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: This is beautiful
I know Kauzzaman, I have missed you :-) Thanks for coming in today
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 7:39 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: Beautiful writing.
thank you so much Kolekshuns :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 7:38 PM
| link to this | reply
Thank you so much Les, you are so sweet :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 7:38 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Glad you liked it Sam :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 6:25 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: very vivid
It is indeed a high compliment Starr childe, when a poet makes a reader cry. Thank you so much :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 6:24 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: Sinome
Thank you Troosha, you are always so kind :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 3:06 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: This is a very nice poem! I liked it a lot!
Thank you Old Dutchman,
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 2:54 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Thank you so much NightawkNY :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 5, 2008 at 2:51 PM
| link to this | reply
"
So I too ask it to wash all the shadows" -nice!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 5, 2008 at 1:48 PM
| link to this | reply
This is a very nice poem! I liked it a lot!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 5, 2008 at 11:44 AM
| link to this | reply
Sinome
You describe the cleansing sensation of rain so beautifully. At times we initially view it as a negative (as the beginning of your poem described) but if we allow it, it can provide us a moment of blissful peace. I loved the progression of this piece….
posted by
Troosha
on May 5, 2008 at 10:31 AM
| link to this | reply
very vivid
love the bit about the linen dress and wet hair, and the last few lines gave me a lump in my throat
posted by
starr_childe
on May 5, 2008 at 9:03 AM
| link to this | reply
I really like this poem. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 5, 2008 at 8:07 AM
| link to this | reply
PS That's a good thang! LeStAte7
posted by
lestate7
on May 5, 2008 at 3:40 AM
| link to this | reply
dOpe !
posted by
lestate7
on May 5, 2008 at 3:39 AM
| link to this | reply
Beautiful writing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 5, 2008 at 12:04 AM
| link to this | reply
This is beautiful
I have not read your post for a long time, Marta.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 4, 2008 at 11:28 PM
| link to this | reply
i know what you mean my dear...you are a very strong woman...and such a strong love...he is so lucky to have you my dear...you captured this yet again so heartfelt my dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 4, 2008 at 10:54 PM
| link to this | reply