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Just to say thank you for your kind and heartfelt comments. It does me good here in cold and sad Germany.
posted by
vogue
on May 24, 2008 at 3:51 AM
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You have a very good consonance thing going on here. Well done. From my
to your
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posted by
cmhnord
on May 19, 2008 at 9:19 AM
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Very good alliteration ~ I agree with Sam ~ this is a great poem.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 13, 2008 at 7:58 PM
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This is so very close. Just take Friday off because fiasco is enough. Must be one word title. Also the last three lines can be taken away because the imagery in the poem is enough to carry the idea. There is so much this poem offers, today I am seeing a tongue twister of sorts along with the alliteration. You have a great one here with the few changes. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 5, 2008 at 7:28 AM
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I am a bit extended today but I will be back for a full assessment in the morning. However, I have read this twice and it is the coolest set up of alliteration I believe I have ever seen. I know there is a lot contained here and I look forward to my return tomorrow. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 4, 2008 at 10:12 PM
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