Go to Christie Marie - Painting with Words
- Add a comment
- Go to My Desire
very talented. That last line might have been, to all the men I've
given in, and all that are to come. But your ending is perfect.
posted by
scriber
on May 3, 2008 at 5:16 AM
| link to this | reply
Nice work!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 2, 2008 at 8:24 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
RomaKay
on May 2, 2008 at 4:58 PM
| link to this | reply
This a grand plea and a very cool form! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2008 at 4:45 PM
| link to this | reply
Well done. I like the method you chose. It was pretty.
posted by
dpaulinomorris24
on May 2, 2008 at 2:50 PM
| link to this | reply
Christie ~.~
Nicely done! --and you're right..."Amen" was a perfect close for this piece (the second syllable is forgiven.) Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 2, 2008 at 2:44 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
CRShelley
on May 2, 2008 at 12:25 PM
| link to this | reply
Splendid words
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 2, 2008 at 12:18 PM
| link to this | reply
excellent
posted by
Star5_
on May 2, 2008 at 12:01 PM
| link to this | reply
I'm impressed by your desire; you make it sing.
posted by
scriber
on May 2, 2008 at 11:59 AM
| link to this | reply
Nice post, thanks for sharing and keep writing. From my
to your
.
posted by
cmhnord
on May 2, 2008 at 11:26 AM
| link to this | reply