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so lyrical ~ and the way it just slides to that ending it ~ is succinct!
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 2, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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what a great compliment!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 2, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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This poem actually reminds me of a Hopper painting. Just the feeling behind it, you know.
posted by
jmh256
on May 2, 2008 at 2:32 PM
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Very meaningful poem! Thanks for the visit!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 2, 2008 at 1:41 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on May 2, 2008 at 12:22 PM
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Night
Wow- that was full of soul!
posted by
Troosha
on May 2, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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Thanks for the comments! I am not in the music industry per se, but i am a musician attending a music school..
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 2, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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A grand poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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Beauty of hope
posted by
Star5_
on May 2, 2008 at 10:50 AM
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hi its ladydew
hi good write.... i enjoyed the read.... keep up great writes ladydew
posted by
ladydew
on May 2, 2008 at 10:35 AM
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I like soulful music
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 2, 2008 at 9:56 AM
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Nighthawk ~.~
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in all things, music soothes the savage beast (as well as the soul). Thank you for sharing...a very wonderful work. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 2, 2008 at 9:47 AM
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well-its all beside the point that you are a very creative crawler
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 2, 2008 at 9:22 AM
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or around it?
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 2, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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r u in the music industry?
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 2, 2008 at 9:11 AM
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