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Boy howdy
Such a wonderful write - I especially love the line -circle of circumstances- it just tickles my tongue.
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on May 3, 2008 at 5:47 AM
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Wow!
To write a poem about the mystery and dilemma of
being is not an easy task, but, you pulled it off. Good job.
posted by
metalrat
on May 2, 2008 at 4:07 PM
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A difficult one. But still well done!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 2, 2008 at 1:40 PM
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Kazzayman ~.~
Great write...greatly expressed. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on May 2, 2008 at 12:52 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on May 2, 2008 at 12:14 PM
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It is really good.
KZ, I think you are a born poet. This is beautiful. Well, it takes longer for me to ponder but definitely it's good. OK I'm not a pro but one do not need to be a pro to evaluate it.
posted by
nuzila
on May 2, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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said so well
posted by
Star5_
on May 2, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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Amazing.
posted by
cmhnord
on May 2, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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I am not what I am
Wow! Very good writing!
posted by
Oosthuizen
on May 2, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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