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If so, whose to say that you should stop
posted by jmh256 on May 1, 2008 at 12:30 PM | | reply |
....some say that it is all a dream....a dream within a dream within a dream....waking from one dream to enter another.....but, what do they know after all? moon 
posted by Dark_Moon on May 1, 2008 at 7:27 AM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 1, 2008 at 6:57 PM
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Beautiful...
...and intriguing. As usual.
posted by
metalrat
on May 1, 2008 at 6:41 PM
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There is always something in every poem you post that has
special meaning.............well done!!!
posted by
jefco
on May 1, 2008 at 5:28 PM
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Purple_Mermaid, I really like that singer. I haven't heard her for a long time, so of course, her name slips my mind. With the music and the beautiful poem combined, reading it does seem to send one off into a dream world.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 1, 2008 at 2:57 PM
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you are just so special dear.
posted by
Kabu
on May 1, 2008 at 12:28 PM
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And then..it becomes a dream again! I love your poems so much, heartfelt, beautifully written and with lovely images to match.
posted by
vogue
on May 1, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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MY Lovely Mermaid
One of your best and straight from the depths of your heart. Don't you ever despair. You will recover to a fine health. Autosuggest that you are ... you are health incarnate, and I guarantee you it'll work miracles. I've been through the worst in life and the mantra worked. Which man can leave you? Which God can leave you? Dreams are dreams in dreams in dreams ... layers, one after another. They are not worth a bother. Be 
like this my dearest.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 1, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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I talk with the Lord last night and He will hold you tightly through this latest turmoil with your health. He will heal you, only believe. Love you dearly, Jen. mom
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2008 at 5:46 AM
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Purple Mermaid
beautiful....
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on May 1, 2008 at 3:16 AM
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Honey, I have a one word for you Marvellous!
posted by
edytka1974
on April 30, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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Dearest Mermaid, this is so beautifully written, so sensual and nostalgic, so sincere, like if it came straight from your heart. The flow of ideas so tenderly shared make the words so intimate...What kind of man would disappear on an angel like you. Truly I can not imagine. I belief this is one of my favorite poems of yours. Just beautiful.
posted by
Sinome
on April 30, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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YOU ARE SO VERY INTERESTING, AND TALENTED IT IS PLEASURE!LESTATE
posted by
lestate7
on April 30, 2008 at 8:42 PM
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purple
we both of been in dream land today
posted by
Lanetay
on April 30, 2008 at 8:05 PM
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Oh this is so beautiful, poetry in motion ~ and the end --- succinct, sublime...sad but so mesmerizing ~ Dear Jen, you're Love is very faithful and strong. ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 30, 2008 at 8:01 PM
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