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Excellent ~ wow, I like the words, the meaning and the form ~ You are good/no you are great
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 1, 2008 at 4:34 PM
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easy yummy sweet exstactic tears of goodness are shed at this
oh! I am so easily affected!
posted by
mysteria
on May 1, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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cmh
I love anything and everything on love especially when its shape is hourglass to top it. Great!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 1, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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Loved it. Great style too.
posted by
dpaulinomorris24
on May 1, 2008 at 7:37 AM
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how sad
posted by
Lanetay
on May 1, 2008 at 6:32 AM
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well written
and so true
posted by
lionreign
on May 1, 2008 at 4:12 AM
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Excellent write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 30, 2008 at 9:57 PM
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My childhood set me up not to expect too much from people.
I've seen your profile. 37 year old single mom of two in Pennsylvania here.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on April 30, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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form
I love the way you styled this poem. Thanks for your comment on my Motherhood poem. I plan to give it to my Mom for Mother's Day. She's my hero, though I do know all too well how only human she is.
posted by
fluidbeauty
on April 30, 2008 at 8:11 PM
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ConcretePoem! great hourglass...shows yr creativity.Glad U visited & I too
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on April 30, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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cmhnord, Interesting form + interesting thoughts makes for double pleasure to the reader.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 30, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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very nicely done and an easy read. Thank you I enjoyed this.
posted by
Kabu
on April 30, 2008 at 5:28 PM
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heartfelt and elegant...lovely composition
posted by
NighthawkNY
on April 30, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Bravo!
I really love this. Elevated thoughts creatively expressed. From my
to yours
.
posted by
metalrat
on April 30, 2008 at 5:14 PM
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...great words of wisdom! Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on April 30, 2008 at 3:07 PM
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I like this very much Cindy...Great stuff!...
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on April 30, 2008 at 1:52 PM
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YOU ROCK! I am so proud of you. This is so well written! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2008 at 12:18 PM
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Very nice. I like the form following function.
posted by
jmh256
on April 30, 2008 at 12:01 PM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on April 30, 2008 at 9:50 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on April 30, 2008 at 9:10 AM
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Putting too high expectations into someone causes mutual downfall. I love the way you form your poems.
posted by
vogue
on April 30, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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