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posted by
Star5_
on May 1, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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nicely written
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 1, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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Yes, I agree, I think there is a breaking point --- you write well - ~ write on~
Elyse (and I'm 7 from a family of 10).
posted by
elysianfields
on April 29, 2008 at 9:11 PM
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I won't pretend to, but I experience bad gut feelings about people and situations sometimes. I think that's the creative pulse. A friend from class said that's what makes man different from the other animals, that is, man does art, and animals don't. But, the beast in man's his gut feeling. Theologians, clergy, the church, whatever, and the Bible says it's the mind of the carnal man. You use the word evil. But, you've spirit and spunk to write! Excellent! Again, I won't pretend to understand your poem. I've never met you. I don't know you. However, I hope that you'll begin to realize that we can read, enjoy, and appreciate each other's work without ever understanding the posts exactly. That's what we're paying for. And, that's what literary analysis and the English major has been about for centuries, love. Good luck in your relationships, and take care.
posted by
BC-A
on April 29, 2008 at 6:50 PM
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