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so well said purple mermaid.
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 30, 2008 at 3:55 PM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on April 30, 2008 at 9:53 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on April 30, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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Reaching out and holding on..as long as possible is the essence of life. If in the end you have to let go, you will still feel the touch forever after.
posted by
vogue
on April 30, 2008 at 5:45 AM
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even if you have to let go at the last minute and stay a while longer ...
this is so true: "
Two hands are better than one…
Holding on to someone makes it easier
To cross the bridge of life
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 29, 2008 at 10:51 PM
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beautiful
posted by
quietguy7
on April 29, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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if there's no hand to hold on.....what would I do????? just lean to the
wall........lay my head on the head......simply dream......I am sorry for being bad......I feel outrageous....
posted by
star4sky5
on April 29, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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Dearest Mermaid, I love to see you are writing ...and seemingly feeling better. Take care of you please. This poem was beautiful, passionate and sincere. All my love. Marta
Please Say hi to lil Mermaid :-) and kiss lil merman for me .xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 29, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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Positive and profound ...
posted by
afzal50
on April 29, 2008 at 8:39 PM
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Dear Jen, this is so passionate, so grand in its beauty ~ touching my core ~ and yes, just 'hold on' and together we -- one will certainly make it further...Touch and compassion, Love and understanding ~ all go hand in hand ~Love u
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 29, 2008 at 8:31 PM
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purple
Nothing last forever
posted by
Lanetay
on April 29, 2008 at 7:42 PM
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as always.....very nice
posted by
jefco
on April 29, 2008 at 7:21 PM
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Nice to see you posting your wonderful poems!
Hope you are feeling better?
posted by
shelly_b
on April 29, 2008 at 6:07 PM
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Glad to see you feeling better, Mermaid!
Lovely work, indeed!
posted by
strat
on April 29, 2008 at 5:39 PM
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I'm off to see my doctor...I shall read you all later, i promise...know that I never meant to miss any of you and your visits and comments mean the world to me. Thank you all so much. I love you my blogit family. Thank you for bringing out the best of this part of me. Bless you all.jeanie.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 29, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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