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A goos start but tragic ending. The man was uinfaithful to her
posted by
adventurer02
on June 5, 2016 at 12:35 AM
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This is real poetry! (And real life too!)
Your writing here is... full of rhytm... It's like music!... A Sad, Sad Song... (Lou Reed)
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 1, 2008 at 11:31 PM
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In these few passages
you have traced the trajectory of this woman's life so amazingly well, one almost, but just
almost, forgets that this is a very sad tale...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 7:14 PM
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i wish i could have met her well done
posted by
jefco
on April 29, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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seedling
this is really good, but sad
posted by
Lanetay
on April 29, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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beautiful but,
. nice post, keep sharing.
posted by
cmhnord
on April 29, 2008 at 1:11 PM
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so sad...
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 29, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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Thanks for your comment on my bus ride. You should have written the grey hound book. The experiences are truly endless and the stories, whether true or partly invented, glorious. I'll go again tomorrow.
posted by
vogue
on April 29, 2008 at 11:00 AM
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Sad, but moving.
posted by
jmh256
on April 29, 2008 at 10:58 AM
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Vogue
Beautiful, tall Sandy had 'spunk' she was a real kick in the pants. As the young girl that I was she often shocked me with her bluntness but at the same time I admired her greatly. She had no children but she left wonderful memories in my mind that I shall never forget. Thank you for commenting
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 29, 2008 at 10:53 AM
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Vicki
She was a wonderful woman...so full of life and yet she died alone in a little house all by herself. I too need to be kinder and more open to people...but you and I have our wonderful children. Sandy (the woman I speak of) never had children
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 29, 2008 at 10:48 AM
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What a tragic, tragic story. I loved the way you spaced it, building up tension to the bitter end. But one has to admire that woman's spunk.
posted by
vogue
on April 29, 2008 at 9:35 AM
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Oh how sad ... this is one of my biggest fears ....
to die alone. I really need to start being nicer to people so that doesn't happen! Seriously, this is just heartbreaking.
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 29, 2008 at 9:07 AM
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