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Great work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 12, 2008 at 11:28 PM
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~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 4, 2008 at 11:04 PM
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I once considered....
...string several Haiku together to form a longer poem. You pulled it off nicely.
posted by
metalrat
on May 2, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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Krisles
I
would need a cigarette if I still smoked...but I don't...so what am I gonna
do???
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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ok, I had to have a cigarette after reading this!
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 30, 2008 at 5:01 PM
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Krisles, I think you pretty much covered it all--at least a goodly portion of it. Well done!
posted by
TAPS.
on April 30, 2008 at 4:08 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 29, 2008 at 11:01 AM
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A most excellent exercise and grand results! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2008 at 6:29 AM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 28, 2008 at 7:37 PM
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