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trippy - thank you for sharing
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 14, 2008 at 1:00 PM
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I like that one a lot. Clap, clap!
posted by
TAPS.
on May 7, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Wiley, but I don't think I have to teach you anything about poetry...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 4, 2008 at 7:09 AM
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Nautikos
Next time you come to visit you'll have to describe how one formulates such grace with words my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 1, 2008 at 7:36 PM
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Re: Did I not tell you once...
Thanks, muser! I guess I have enough for 17 syllables, occasionally...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:22 PM
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Thank you, BC!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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Thanks, TAPS. And you're right, of course, nothing is ever entirely motionless, except by poetic licence...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:20 PM
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Re: What a great haiku, Naut...
Thanks saul!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:18 PM
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Thanks, Elyse. I guess I'll just keep going, on and off, until I run out of steam or imagination...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:18 PM
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Thank you, OTA, especially coming from you...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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Re: Great write, Jack ~.~
Much appreciated, soulspeaker!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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Thank you, CRS!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:13 PM
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Thanks, jmh!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:12 PM
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Re: Excellent.
Thanks, Chuck!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:10 PM
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Re: Love
Thank you, SEEDLINGS!
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:09 PM
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Thanks, sam. Coming from a
real poet, that's certainly high praise...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2008 at 2:09 PM
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Did I not tell you once...
that you have the heart of a poet? I rest my case...
Beautiful...an overused word...but the best one for now. I'm reading a book I first read almost twenty years ago. "Finding Flow" by Mihaly Csikszentmihalyi. I think you would find it very interesting. I am so very pleased you are writing poetry. muser
posted by
muser
on April 29, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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awesome
posted by
BC-A
on April 29, 2008 at 3:35 AM
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Great, Naut. Is anything ever really motionless?
posted by
TAPS.
on April 29, 2008 at 12:56 AM
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What a great haiku, Naut...
posted by
saul_relative
on April 28, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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Oh wow ~ I see fiddleheads ~
I mean lush --- patches but, then I see much 'green' within this ~ oh this stunning!!! Ok, I am so enjoying your wonderful writings ~ you must keep going (if this is no 12, how far are you intending on going --- 'til infinity I hope?) ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 27, 2008 at 7:37 PM
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Excellent.
posted by
metalrat
on April 27, 2008 at 6:49 PM
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a very Creative one my friend
~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 27, 2008 at 4:12 AM
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Great write, Jack ~.~
Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 26, 2008 at 6:27 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 26, 2008 at 4:29 PM
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This makes me think of a lush forest. Nice.
posted by
jmh256
on April 26, 2008 at 2:13 PM
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Love
This piece. Great stuff
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on April 26, 2008 at 1:45 PM
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That's it. A perfect haiku! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 26, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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