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interesting setting...nice prosody
posted by
NighthawkNY
on April 30, 2008 at 5:56 PM
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Re: scramble
Ha Ha--I just love your comments Lilane! Many thanks indeed! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 27, 2008 at 10:58 AM
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Re: Hi Sue-many thanks indeed! These are Beautifull! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 27, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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Re: Thank you so much wigopa! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 27, 2008 at 10:55 AM
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Re: Thank you so much wigopa! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 27, 2008 at 10:55 AM
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Re: Thank you for that Elyse! That (almost)answers everything! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 27, 2008 at 10:55 AM
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Re: Am I dumb? Why does the clock stop tickin when the mind-body and
As I understand Haiku Straightforward-the third line is supposed to be and opposite-(or similar)-of the first/second lines! Or-simply a curiosity for a reader to put in whatever he/she feels fitting for them! Very many thanks! Chris.
(if I'm wrong-sorry.)
posted by
Scramble
on April 27, 2008 at 10:54 AM
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Re: very creative Chris, very nice.
You're welcome whirlwindaffair--and many thanks to you-too! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 27, 2008 at 10:51 AM
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scramble
I thought at first this was a new language, then it dawned on me
posted by
Lanetay
on April 27, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on April 27, 2008 at 12:11 AM
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Perfection place in a haiku! This is a gem Chris..Brilliant!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 26, 2008 at 11:35 PM
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Great ~ when the clock stops ~ total synchronation --- epiphany~~~ in Haiku
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 26, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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Am I dumb? Why does the clock stop tickin when the mind-body and
soul are synchronised?
posted by
Straightforward
on April 26, 2008 at 4:11 PM
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very creative Chris, very nice.
thank you for dropping by earlier
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 26, 2008 at 3:53 PM
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Re: Sorry Soul Builder--I have got the spelling wrong!Perhaps the correct
spelling will help--'synchronization'--Many thanks indeed! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 26, 2008 at 1:42 PM
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Got me thinking here!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 26, 2008 at 1:25 PM
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Re: Very Nice!
Many thank you's Kolekshuns! Glad you liked it.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 26, 2008 at 11:38 AM
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Re: Thank you so much Purple Mermaid! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 26, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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Very Nice!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 26, 2008 at 10:39 AM
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 26, 2008 at 3:07 AM
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