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I was magnetized to your poem, it's a fantastic job!
posted by
edytka1974
on April 27, 2008 at 4:05 PM
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Very beautiful Jen. mom
posted by
sam444
on April 26, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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Awesome as ever!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 26, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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purple
like a good man
posted by
Lanetay
on April 26, 2008 at 7:25 AM
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My husband came in and caught me crying!
You do very well , luv, capturing the mood and blending the songs. I'll probably play and read it again so I can cry at will. I feel this one personally, Jen. I promised never to contact "him" ever again. That's a long long time for one who left me, whom I loved and always will. SO this one "I get" personally.
CEE 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on April 26, 2008 at 7:04 AM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 26, 2008 at 6:27 AM
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Purple Mermaid
I always like the footnotes that you post. Makes you see things in a different perspective.
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 25, 2008 at 11:38 PM
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Oh, this carries such a sadness ~ but --- reality can bring greys --- This is moving --- and very poignant!!!
u Jen
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 25, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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some times we got to wait forever
posted by
Star5_
on April 25, 2008 at 9:21 PM
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