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Well, there are some good drama elements here....you need to use spellcheck if you are seriously wanting to develop a story here....doesn't matter I suppose if this is a journal for your own purposes, but a habit you should get into if you are seriously wanting people to read you as a writer. The story can draw some sympathy, curiousity....can draw "fixers", peple who have been through what the character is going through, parents of characters like this who want to understand....lots of possibility here....good luck and welcome to Blogit!
posted by
Krisles
on April 25, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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effective emotion and a nice bathroom action description, love
posted by
BC-A
on April 25, 2008 at 6:51 PM
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