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Re: Thanks you all for the positive feedback.
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on April 25, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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Re: Effective writing & communication. I wish U had kept the 3 line combos.
I'm a fan of catharism and since I don't find any living tradition nearby that practice in the open I've just invented a phrase that can give some indication of my preference. I do believe we are in a time where we do not have to "belong" to a specific building/place centered expression of our views but rather give expression of our views to a wider audience via the internet for example. That doesn't say people should not gather in communal devotion and learning. Each to his/her own calling.
Plesier. Ek is ook 'n "novice" en eerder 'n rymelaar as digter. Shalom
I'm a rhymer, not a poet by any standard I'm aware of. I never try to follow any preconceived form. I just write what comes to mind. My efforts at rhymes are not intended as literary achievements. I simply have things to say and say them in whatever way they come out.
posted by
AardigeAfrikaner
on April 25, 2008 at 2:59 PM
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This is full of depth ~ very evocative and well-written of boredom and rage and madness --- obsession and much. This speaks volumes
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 24, 2008 at 5:53 PM
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I like this one very much, very poignant! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 24, 2008 at 4:58 PM
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Effective writing & communication. I wish U had kept the 3 line combos. but
that is a small idiosyncrasy from a novice poet here. Baie Dankie, en Goeie Ontmoeting van Neil na jou and Lindie en jou fgesin in NZ! Shalom. What is New Catharism?
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on April 24, 2008 at 4:54 PM
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wow. very powerful words!! enjoyed you other works as well!!
posted by
RomaKay
on April 24, 2008 at 4:35 PM
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